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Fall Writing Frenzy 2020

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I decided to throw my hat into the ring for the wonderful Fall Writing Frenzy Contest again this year. For those who don’t know, you pick an image and write a story for kids in 200 words or less. Mine is sad, but it’s the one that poured out of my beleaguered 2020 soul.

I hope it speaks to you in some way. Thanks for stopping by, and thanks to the amazing Kaitlyn Sanchez and Lydia Lukidis for sponsoring this contest. And a huge thanks to all the donors!

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Mom’s Last Wish
2020 Fall Writing Frenzy
199 Words

“I want to see the leaves change color one last time,” Mom said in July when we heard her cancer was back—and worse than ever.

I swallowed hard, but couldn’t form words.

Dad walked over and took Mom’s hand. “We’ll make it happen. I promise.”

So we took Mom home, and kept her room filled with flowers, music, art—and as much laughter as we could manage. For me, laughter was the hardest part.

One early morning in October, Dad gently shook me awake. “Let’s give Mom her wish.”

A red convertible glowed against the sunrise.

I gawked, and Mom smiled. Dad said, “I figure we should do this right.”

As the morning fog burned off the highway, Mom looked between us. “It’s beautiful. This will go in our favorite memories album. Whenever we feel sad, we can flip to this day.”

I closed my eyes, memorizing the wind on my face, and the smell of damp air. But what if I can’t remember everything?

At the slightest touch against my arm, I opened my eyes.

A lone leaf—swirled yellow and orange, had dropped from above.

A tangible keepsake of Mom’s last wish.

Now, I’ll never forget.


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  1. DeAnna Smith

    Oh Melissa, I love this. I am weeping at the beautiful sight painted out here for me to take in with your thoughtful words. Such a lovely portrait of love and happiness. Thank you for sharing your gift for me to enjoy this the first day of October. DeAnna

  2. It’s achingly sweet and the voice seeps love for family. Wish you the best in the contest.

  3. Jennifer Raudenbush

    Wow, you really pulled me in with the first sentence. Very poignant piece. Good luck!

  4. Colleen Owen Murphy

    I love the fact that dad borrowed the red convertible for the occasion. Very moving story.

  5. This is so beautiful and sad. I love the last image of the story.

  6. Wow. So heartfelt and bittersweet <3

  7. I love the way you put that! Thanks for reading. 🙂

  8. Oh my heart! A delicate tribute to tragedy.

  9. Oh, this is so touching! Very nice!

  10. Colleen Owen Murphy


  11. The above comment was from me, Jennifer Richter (sorry, I clicked too soon). And thank you for your kind words about my story.

  12. Jamie Bills

    What a powerful story in so few words. I was holding back my emotions. We used to drive up in the mountains with my grandparents every fall to look at the leaves, then came the year we lost both of them to cancer. You brought back those feelings. Beautiful. Best wishes with the contest.

  13. Thanks for taking the time to read.

  14. This is beautiful <3 Thank you for sharing your work

  15. Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it.

  16. Oh, wow, this really tugs at the heart, Melissa. You did a lovely job creating emotion and scene in a small number of words. Good luck with your entry!

  17. Melissa, Wow! So much emotion packed into so few words. The ending was perfect!❤️

  18. Very sweet, thanks for sharing with us for the fall writing frenzy

  19. Very sweet, thanks for sharing with us for the fall writing frenzy

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